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Data is on a mission to retrieve radioactive debris from a downed probe on the pre-industrial planet Barkon IV. But he suddenly shows up in a village on the planet, and he appears to have lost his memory. Data befriends Garvin, his daughter Gia and the teacher Talur. But he unwittingly spreads radioactive metal fragments of the probe throughout the village. When more and more of the villagers are showing signs of radiation sickness, they put the blame on the strange looking man. They finally lynch and bury Data, but the Enterprise manages to locate and salvage him. In the meantime, on the Enterprise, Deanna has passed the last exam for her promotion to commander, the subject of which was to be able to condemn one crew member to death in order to save the ship.
Data is sent to Barkon IV, a pre-industrial planet, on a routine mission to retrieve some radioactive material from a probe that crashed. Unfortunately, something has gone wrong. Data completely loses his memory and wanders into a village carrying a container full of the radioactive metal. He is soon befriended by Garvin and Gia, a father and his young daughter. Garvin unwittingly opens the container in hopes of finding a clue to Data's identity.
 
 
Data is taken to meet Talur, the town healer, who mistakenly deduces that he is one of a race of people rumored to live in the mountains. Gia names him "Jayden," and Garvin takes Data and his metal fragments to Skoran, the town blacksmith. Skoran has no idea what the metal might be, but offers to buy the unique-looking pieces to transform into jewelry. Data sells him half, keeping the rest as clues to his identity.
 
 
Unaware that the metal is dangerous, Garvin soon falls ill. As people buy Skoran's jewelry, the mysterious sickness spreads, and Talur, with her primitive knowledge, is unable to find a solution. Sensing that he might be able to solve the problem, Data decides to launch his own investigation, but is interrupted when the frightened townspeople blame him for causing the disease.
 
 
Data constructs a primitive lab to study the illness, and Talur offers what tools she has to help him find an explanation. Data searches for a common experience that unites all the sufferers, and stumbles on what could be the answer when Gia falls ill. Noticing that she is wearing a pendant made from his mystery metal, Data realizes that everyone who is sick has had contact with the material, and decides to study it. However, Skoran, who now shows signs of the illness, and two men burst into Data's lab and attack him, tearing away part of the skin from his face. Seeing that Data is made of metal, the horrified men flee.
 
 
The men tell Garvin and Gia what they have seen, but once they leave, Data emerges from where he has been hiding and reveals himself to Gia, who still trusts him despite his strange appearance. Having realized the metal is causing the illness, Data continues to work until he has developed a cure, and gives some to Garvin and Gia. He then heads for the town's only well to put the antidote in the water supply, sure that the townspeople will not trust him to cure them. Just as he is pouring in the last of the solution, Data is attacked by Skoran and an angry mob, who apparently kill him. Luckily, however, all of his antidote is deposited into the well.
 
 
Later, Beverly and Riker arrive on Barkon IV disguised as townspeople. They meet Gia, who sadly tells them that Data is buried by the well, while the metal that made everyone sick has been deposited in the forest. Data is retrieved and returned to the Enterprise, where he is repaired and reactivated, remembering nothing at all of his experiences.
 
 
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# ''Alfonso Turnage on Monday, June 21, 1999 - 7:15 pm:'' Data says that the elements are not a part of human/humanoid beings - I'd have to say he was wrong. Human beings are made of/contain minerals and flesh that turns to dust/dirt when we die-earth. Human beings have to maintain 98.6 degrees f or die-fire (this is very hot, touch water that is this temperature). Human beings have to drink water and breathe in order to live-water and air. I believe the correct correction was that the elements of nature as they are called are not in everything. '''''Matthew Patterson (Mpatterson) on Monday, June 21, 1999 - 8:10 pm:'' No, we don't have to maintain 98.6 degrees. That number is rarely right. Body temperature varies from person to person and from time to time. Your temp will be higher after a period of exercise than when you first get up in the morning, for example. And some people just have naturally low or high normal temps. I think it has something to do with our metabolism.'''
 
# ''Alfonso Turnage on Monday, June 21, 1999 - 7:15 pm:'' Data says that the elements are not a part of human/humanoid beings - I'd have to say he was wrong. Human beings are made of/contain minerals and flesh that turns to dust/dirt when we die-earth. Human beings have to maintain 98.6 degrees f or die-fire (this is very hot, touch water that is this temperature). Human beings have to drink water and breathe in order to live-water and air. I believe the correct correction was that the elements of nature as they are called are not in everything. '''''Matthew Patterson (Mpatterson) on Monday, June 21, 1999 - 8:10 pm:'' No, we don't have to maintain 98.6 degrees. That number is rarely right. Body temperature varies from person to person and from time to time. Your temp will be higher after a period of exercise than when you first get up in the morning, for example. And some people just have naturally low or high normal temps. I think it has something to do with our metabolism.'''
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# When Data pours the medicine into the well, why doesn't anyone of the many bystanders suspect he is poisoning the village's water? '''He probably arranged for the villagers to be informed about his plan to admisinter a cure by adding it to the well.'''
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# It is hardly realistic that an exam for promotion to the rank of commander and/or bridge officer consists of just a few tests that can be taken any time, in a matter of a few days and as often as required to pass them. '''Staranger things have happened!'''
 
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According to Memory Alpha's original in Universe Timeline, the story sequence is: Paradise : Thine Own Self : Shadowplay.

Summary

Data is on a mission to retrieve radioactive debris from a downed probe on the pre-industrial planet Barkon IV. But he suddenly shows up in a village on the planet, and he appears to have lost his memory. Data befriends Garvin, his daughter Gia and the teacher Talur. But he unwittingly spreads radioactive metal fragments of the probe throughout the village. When more and more of the villagers are showing signs of radiation sickness, they put the blame on the strange looking man. They finally lynch and bury Data, but the Enterprise manages to locate and salvage him. In the meantime, on the Enterprise, Deanna has passed the last exam for her promotion to commander, the subject of which was to be able to condemn one crew member to death in order to save the ship.

Errors and Explanations

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Plot Oversights

  1. The magistrate first telling his daughter to go to school a few moments after twice telling her to go home. Perhaps it had become time for her to go to school by the time of the third request.
  2. The magistrate's daughter knocking to gain entrance to her own home. To be fair, there is a strange man being examined in the room at the time.
  3. Data not knowing what radioactive means, while still being able to describe possible improvements to a magnifying glass. The radiation may have created temporary gaps in his memory.

Nit Central

  1. Alfonso Turnage on Monday, June 21, 1999 - 7:15 pm: Data says that the elements are not a part of human/humanoid beings - I'd have to say he was wrong. Human beings are made of/contain minerals and flesh that turns to dust/dirt when we die-earth. Human beings have to maintain 98.6 degrees f or die-fire (this is very hot, touch water that is this temperature). Human beings have to drink water and breathe in order to live-water and air. I believe the correct correction was that the elements of nature as they are called are not in everything. Matthew Patterson (Mpatterson) on Monday, June 21, 1999 - 8:10 pm: No, we don't have to maintain 98.6 degrees. That number is rarely right. Body temperature varies from person to person and from time to time. Your temp will be higher after a period of exercise than when you first get up in the morning, for example. And some people just have naturally low or high normal temps. I think it has something to do with our metabolism.

Ex Astris Scientia

  1. When Data pours the medicine into the well, why doesn't anyone of the many bystanders suspect he is poisoning the village's water? He probably arranged for the villagers to be informed about his plan to admisinter a cure by adding it to the well.
  2. It is hardly realistic that an exam for promotion to the rank of commander and/or bridge officer consists of just a few tests that can be taken any time, in a matter of a few days and as often as required to pass them. Staranger things have happened!


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